I think we're talking at cross purposes here.
Haywain was saying that £80 is the average cost of administering the process, and I feel strongly that is doesn't. You seem to be agreeing with me.
Haywain was saying (in essence) that £80 is the average cost of administering the process, and I feel strongly that is isn't, there is also a profit element (which also functions as a deterrent). You seem to be agreeing with me.
I merely made the point that costs will vary, and would be increased by trying to apportion them correctly to each individual case.The idea that every infraction costs Northern exactly £80 no matter the circumstances is laughably absurd. This is another revenue stream for Train Companies.
If I was to write back to them explaining my situation but not defending myself (aka pleading guilty) what does that result in? Would that just be an immediate fine and record, no more questions asked, no court/trial and such?
Sorry to be so pedantic about your wording. I can only echo the good advice you've already been given - wait until the letter comes and answer it honestly and apologetically. In the meantime, try not to worry too much, and if you haven't already done so make a note of all that was said between yourself and the inspectors lest you forget (the letter may take some time to arrive)
If you are guilty then it is best to say so now. As has been said previously, it's best to be honest and apologetic, and you can also offer to settle the matter by way of a contribution towards their costs, time spent and fare due.
There's no need to say guilty at all. Just explain what happened, apologise for not buying a ticket before travelling, say that you have learned a valuable lesson about rail travel and it won't happen again.
And then all you have to do is to make sure it doesn't!
I would not use the term out of court settlement myself. Just say that you realise you made a mistake and would like to compensate the company and settle the matter... etc.
If the train company accepts your offer of compensation (or however you word it) then the courts will not be involved, and so there can be no conviction. It becomes a private matter between you and the company.
I certainly will not board without a ticket again.
Should it be longer?
I would consider leaving out the bits about not being approached by a ticket seller on the train. You had already had an opportunity to pay by that time, and it could be read as though you are trying to blame the company rather than taking responsibility for your own actions.
Similarly, I'd take out the piece about if it not being possible to buy before boarding etc, as this comes across as though you might do it again in the right circumstances, despite your assurances.
It's always OK to board without a ticket if there were no facilities to do so at your origin station. It's not OK to be in rush and pass up an opportunity. All you need to say is you didn't know that boarding without a ticket on this route could be a serious matter, and that now that you do realise, you will ensure that it never happens again!
I've never seen one of these forms, and I've never been asked this, as most people ask for advice or have their drafts proof read before committing it to paper!
If you have already written it then I would leave it, to be honest. They are only small points, the main thrust of your reply should just be to admit what you did, say you have learned your lesson, reassure them that it won't happen again and ask for the offence to be disposed of by way of an administrative settlement.
The most important thing is to ensure that you don't end up in the same situation again. It is your responsibility to buy a ticket, not the guard's responsibility to come through the train and sell you one, so you can't rely on this in future. There are any number of good reasons why you may not be able to buy on board, from broken ticket machines to safety critical duties or passenger assistance. You must buy a ticket before boarding, if it happens again your chances of a settlement will be zero.
I ensure its not going to happen again, I wouldn't want this situation again! And I started to write it on paper because of the feedback I'd gotten here being generally positive. I guess I was just anxious to get it done. Thanks for the help.
No problem, it's understandable you were anxious. Many people don't realise how serious the situation can be if you are travelling without a ticket when there were facilities available to buy one at the start of the journey. Good luck!
Also there are sometimes reports on here of replies not having been received (where a cynic might suggest that was because were never sent).
So keep a copy, get a certificate of posting as a minimum (by posting it at a counter at a post office), and phone them a few days later to check they have received it.
By keep a copy you mean a copy of what I wrote?