Hi
@Hadders we were shocked yesterday to have received another one of those letters after the first case was closed in December.
While the language is identical, it’s back dated to September. Core issue is the same my son was travelling on an expired railcard, carelessly booking tickets on Trainline without checking expiration date. First time he couldn’t produce a ticket because his phone battery had died and was asked his name and address.
This time he had a ticket to show but no one asked about his railcard, neither was he stopped or asked about his details. Could they be digging through his past purchases and sending letters now?
He has already apologised to them, paid what they asked, bought a railcard, has been extremely careful while booking tickets, since realising in October.
I’m very nervous this time as this is the second time theyve sent a letter so he will be considered as having had history regarding fare evasion, even though we thought we had addressed it last time.
My son has drafted something please let us know if it will persuade them to let him off the hook.
Dear Mr. Ismail,
I am emailing you in response to your letter dated 10th January 2025, that I received on 16th January 2025.
I would like to apologize and accept responsibility for the incident on 19th September where I failed to show a valid rail card but I did have the rail ticket.
As you will observe from the previous mails that I received a letter from Chiltern Railways in October regarding a similar incident in July, until that letter arrived I was still buying tickets on a railcard that was no longer valid. I take full responsibility for inadvertently making this mistake and would like to give context surrounding this matter. In September 2022, at age 16, I started using a train service (Chiltern Railways) for the first time in life to commute to/from school (before that, I used to commute to/ from school via school bus) based on a 16-17 Saver Railcard that my parents bought me (Image attached below). I did not realize that the Railcard was valid only for a year and hence continued to use it even after it expired in September 2023, relying on the booking process of the Trainline app which does not take into account the Railcard Number / Barcode, etc to check validity. I now realise that I should have got a new 16-25 Saver Railcard in September 2023 (after I turned 17 in August 2023) and apologize for this complete oversight on my part in my daily rush of catching the train, distractions with A-levels and not focusing on this important aspect.
Since receiving the first letter in October I promptly bought a railcard. I have been extremely mindful of buying the right tickets just as I promised. You will see from my records that I have not faulted since our last exchange.
This is a life lesson for me, stress over this situation is a huge punishment for me and I deeply regret it and am committed to never making this kind of an error again. Upon receiving the letter, I brought this to my parents' attention and have realised my mistake. I have now bought a new 16-25 Railcard (Image attached below) and have also put a reminder on my phone regarding its expiration on October 15, 2025.
As you will note, I had just turned 18 a month ago at the time of this incident. I have been extremely diligent and mindful since receiving the first letter from Chiltern in October regarding incident in July. As you will note from my ticket transactions. None of this is meant to be an excuse and I request if this matter can be settled without the need for court action so that this genuine oversight early on in life does not affect my chances later on in life. I am willing to pay the outstanding fare and the administrative costs in dealing with this matter.
I sincerely hope you will consider my request sympathetically and allow me an opportunity to learn from this matter and become more aware and mindful in every aspect of life going forward.
Kind Regards
We will attach the expired railcard, Current valid one and train ticket from September 19th.
We appreciate your help. This has been very stressful.