Harlesden
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Does the following make any sense and is it worthwhile developing the idea?
"6th September 2013 was an unusually warm balmy day as the train pulled out of (station) heading towards (name) tunnel. As the train entered the tunnel, it began coasting slowly to a stop as first the trains diesel engines failed, followed a second or two later by the train's interior lighting. As it came to a stop 200 or 300 yards inside the tunnel, the driver tries desperately to restart his engines. After a minute or so, he is successful, and the train begins slowly moving.
It is the longest tunnel on the route, and on this warm day, the passengers are relieved as daylight reappears. However, the houses and commercial premises they expected to see, which had become so familiar to regular passengers were simply not there. Instead, there was nothing but green fields stretching as far as the eye could see.
A few minutes later, as the train drew into (name) station, there were even more shocks in store for both driver and passengers. Not only did the station itself look totally different, but the waiting passengers and railway staff were dressed very oddly. There were far more station staff than anyone had ever seen before.
The newspaper stall with the board in front of it provided a clue. The board displayed the headline of the day. "Arsenal FC move to new ground at Highbury." The Arsenal fans among the train's passengers had a quick think and realized when this momentous event actually happened. 6th September 1913.
Somehow, the train and its passengers had been set back 100 years in time. The passengers on the station platform could not believe their eyes as they gazed at this ugly garish mechanical monster now sitting in the platform making very odd noises. Many of them shrank back in fear at the sight and sound of the thing that had just pulled into their station.
What had happened to the beautiful (colour) locomotive and carriages they had been expecting and waiting for?
The passengers on the train were equally disturbed by what they were now witnessing, especially when a very old fashioned train consisting of steam locomotive, a string of waggons and a strange short carriage on the back of the train passed by on the other line. It had been the locomotive's loud whistle that had startled everyone."
NOTE: It doesn't have to be a 170 but logically needs to be a basic DMU
"6th September 2013 was an unusually warm balmy day as the train pulled out of (station) heading towards (name) tunnel. As the train entered the tunnel, it began coasting slowly to a stop as first the trains diesel engines failed, followed a second or two later by the train's interior lighting. As it came to a stop 200 or 300 yards inside the tunnel, the driver tries desperately to restart his engines. After a minute or so, he is successful, and the train begins slowly moving.
It is the longest tunnel on the route, and on this warm day, the passengers are relieved as daylight reappears. However, the houses and commercial premises they expected to see, which had become so familiar to regular passengers were simply not there. Instead, there was nothing but green fields stretching as far as the eye could see.
A few minutes later, as the train drew into (name) station, there were even more shocks in store for both driver and passengers. Not only did the station itself look totally different, but the waiting passengers and railway staff were dressed very oddly. There were far more station staff than anyone had ever seen before.
The newspaper stall with the board in front of it provided a clue. The board displayed the headline of the day. "Arsenal FC move to new ground at Highbury." The Arsenal fans among the train's passengers had a quick think and realized when this momentous event actually happened. 6th September 1913.
Somehow, the train and its passengers had been set back 100 years in time. The passengers on the station platform could not believe their eyes as they gazed at this ugly garish mechanical monster now sitting in the platform making very odd noises. Many of them shrank back in fear at the sight and sound of the thing that had just pulled into their station.
What had happened to the beautiful (colour) locomotive and carriages they had been expecting and waiting for?
The passengers on the train were equally disturbed by what they were now witnessing, especially when a very old fashioned train consisting of steam locomotive, a string of waggons and a strange short carriage on the back of the train passed by on the other line. It had been the locomotive's loud whistle that had startled everyone."
NOTE: It doesn't have to be a 170 but logically needs to be a basic DMU
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