hairstories
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Hi everyone,
I’m hoping for some guidance and perspective about a situation I’m currently dealing with involving South Western Railway’s Prosecutions Team.
In June, I was stopped after travelling without a valid ticket between Cobham and Vauxhall, where I had bought a ticket from Clapham Junction to Vauxhall using trainline.
I completely accept that I made a mistake and should have made sure I had the correct ticket before boarding. I’ve learned a very big lesson from this and I’m truly sorry for what happened. A few weeks later, I received an email from SWR with an Excel spreadsheet showing around 80 journeys they’d flagged for review. I’ve carefully gone through every single one and added my explanations. Out of those, 9 were journeys I personally made without a valid ticket. The rest of the flagged journeys were mostly tickets that I bought through Trainline for family members or genuine trips by myself, all of whom had their own valid railcards. I didn’t use my own railcard for anyone else’s travel. Some of my regular journeys, especially between Leatherhead and Epsom, were to attend Jobcentre appointments while I was unemployed. I’ve included those details in my responses to SWR so they can see the context as a separate column in the excel detailing where I was going to and from, and have copies of all railcards to send to them.
I’ve written the following apology letter to send to them, and I’d be really thankful if anyone could please give me some feedback on how it reads:
Dear South Western Railway Prosecution Team,
I am writing to offer my sincere apology for travelling without a valid ticket from Cobham. I completely understand that this was a breach of the rules, and I take full responsibility for my actions. There is no excuse for failing to buy a valid ticket, and I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience and concern this caused to railway staff and the company.
I appreciate that your investigation has identified a number of journeys, and I have done my best to provide clear and honest explanations for each. Out of around 80 journeys listed, 9 were journeys that I made without a valid ticket. For the others, these were journeys I completed including from my hometown station of Leatherhead, and additionally I had purchased tickets via Trainline for family members who travelled using their own valid railcards. I have noted in Column V of the excel further context of the journeys. Please find attached copies of my railcards that I have held going back to 2023.
Many of my regular trips, especially between Leatherhead and Epsom, were to attend Jobcentre appointments while I was unemployed. Other journeys were for commuting, job interviews, or personal commitments.
I have reflected a great deal on this and have learned an important lesson. I will always make sure I buy the correct ticket in future and comply fully with all travel rules. I assure you this won’t happen again.
I’m very keen to make things right and would be extremely grateful to settle the matter out of court if possible. I’m willing to pay any outstanding fares, administrative costs, or penalties to bring this to a conclusion.
Once again, I sincerely apologise for my mistake and for the time this has taken from your team.
Kind regards,
I’m hoping for some guidance and perspective about a situation I’m currently dealing with involving South Western Railway’s Prosecutions Team.
In June, I was stopped after travelling without a valid ticket between Cobham and Vauxhall, where I had bought a ticket from Clapham Junction to Vauxhall using trainline.
I completely accept that I made a mistake and should have made sure I had the correct ticket before boarding. I’ve learned a very big lesson from this and I’m truly sorry for what happened. A few weeks later, I received an email from SWR with an Excel spreadsheet showing around 80 journeys they’d flagged for review. I’ve carefully gone through every single one and added my explanations. Out of those, 9 were journeys I personally made without a valid ticket. The rest of the flagged journeys were mostly tickets that I bought through Trainline for family members or genuine trips by myself, all of whom had their own valid railcards. I didn’t use my own railcard for anyone else’s travel. Some of my regular journeys, especially between Leatherhead and Epsom, were to attend Jobcentre appointments while I was unemployed. I’ve included those details in my responses to SWR so they can see the context as a separate column in the excel detailing where I was going to and from, and have copies of all railcards to send to them.
- Stations involved: Cobham to Vauxhall (9 journeys personally made)
- Total journeys flagged: Approximately 80
- Railcard: 16–25 Railcard (used only for my own travel)
- Tickets purchased for family: Via Trainline – family members used their own valid railcards
- Encounter with staff: Details were taken and I was issued a prosecution notice
- Desired outcome: To settle the matter out of court if offered
I’ve written the following apology letter to send to them, and I’d be really thankful if anyone could please give me some feedback on how it reads:
Dear South Western Railway Prosecution Team,
I am writing to offer my sincere apology for travelling without a valid ticket from Cobham. I completely understand that this was a breach of the rules, and I take full responsibility for my actions. There is no excuse for failing to buy a valid ticket, and I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience and concern this caused to railway staff and the company.
I appreciate that your investigation has identified a number of journeys, and I have done my best to provide clear and honest explanations for each. Out of around 80 journeys listed, 9 were journeys that I made without a valid ticket. For the others, these were journeys I completed including from my hometown station of Leatherhead, and additionally I had purchased tickets via Trainline for family members who travelled using their own valid railcards. I have noted in Column V of the excel further context of the journeys. Please find attached copies of my railcards that I have held going back to 2023.
Many of my regular trips, especially between Leatherhead and Epsom, were to attend Jobcentre appointments while I was unemployed. Other journeys were for commuting, job interviews, or personal commitments.
I have reflected a great deal on this and have learned an important lesson. I will always make sure I buy the correct ticket in future and comply fully with all travel rules. I assure you this won’t happen again.
I’m very keen to make things right and would be extremely grateful to settle the matter out of court if possible. I’m willing to pay any outstanding fares, administrative costs, or penalties to bring this to a conclusion.
Once again, I sincerely apologise for my mistake and for the time this has taken from your team.
Kind regards,