Dear [GWR member of staff],
Thank you for your email. [insert the part about illness here]
Discrepancy in Anytime fares
Firstly, I have taken another look at the amounts which you are asking for. I have noted that for 8 journeys, they do not match the Anytime fare which was applicable to the journey at that time, either due to a simple mismatch or because of the incorrect ticket type or route being selected.
| Journey | Date | Correct Anytime fare | Anytime fare you are asking for | Issue |
|---|
| BDM-BRI | 10/01/2021 | £2.70 | £4.70 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
| WSM-BRI | 11/10/2023 | £13.10 | £17.20 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
| BTH-MAN | 14/10/2023 | £100.10 | £119.60 | I bought a "via Hereford" ticket but you are asking me for the cost of an "Any Permitted" ticket |
| MCV-RCD | 14/10/2023 | £6.00 | £8.60 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
| RCD-MCV | 14/10/2023 | £6.00 | £8.60 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
| WSM-BRI | 16/12/2023 | £13.10 | £17.20 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
| WSM-BTH | 30/12/2023 | £16.80 | £30.20 | I bought a day return, but you are charging me for the cost of a period/open return |
| BRI-BTH | 10/02/2024 | £9.50 | £15.10 | Fare does not match the Anytime fare that was in force at the time |
In total, this means your current claim is £53.90 higher than what I believe to be the accurate cost of Anytime fares for the journeys in question. I trust you will therefore agree that the fare element of your claim should therefore be reduced to £673.30 in Anytime fares, minus £289.35 Railcard-discounted fares paid, equalling £383.95.
This being said, I also cannot accept full liability for the amount you are asking, due to the following four issues:
1) Lack of legal basis for administration charge
The amount sought includes an administration charge, however you have been unable to explain a legal basis for recovering such fees. The National Rail Conditions of Travel (NRCoT) state the circumstances in which administration fees are payable, for example when requesting a refund or change to a ticket - but my case does not fall into any of the specified circumstances.
Condition 9.2.1, which you rely on to claim Anytime fares, sets out the contractual outcome for travelling without a valid ticket - it does not mention any administration fees. I am sure you will appreciate that I cannot consider paying administration charges for which there is no legal basis. If there is a legal basis you have not yet set out, I would invite you to do so at the earliest opportunity.
2) Lack of legal basis to recover fares for journeys you were not part of
The amount sought includes tickets where I did not hold a contract with GWR, for example Manchester to Rochdale or Stockport. I note that page 4 of the NRCoT states:
- When you buy a Ticket to travel on scheduled train services on the National Rail Network you enter into a binding contract with each of the Train Companies whose trains your Ticket allows you to use.
As you were not one of the Train Companies that these tickets allowed me to use, you were not a party to those contracts. Accordingly, there is no evidence of any contractual basis for you to bring a claim against me in relation to these tickets.
The fact that your staff are authorised officers of the railway, or that the Department for Transport may have instructed you to recover amounts for the taxpayer, does not change this core contractual position. If your claim is on an alternative basis, or you have evidence that you have been authorised to pursue contractual claims on behalf of other train companies, I would invite you to share this as soon as possible. As you will understand, I cannot consider paying amounts that other train companies could later also ask me for - this would put me at risk of 'double jeopardy'.
3) Non-applicability of NRCoT condition 9.2.1
Your claim appears to be based on condition 9.2.1 of the NRCoT - however I would deny that it applies in these circumstances. The condition states that:
- If you are unable to present a valid Ticket when asked ... we are permitted in law to ... charge you the full undiscounted “anytime” single fare to a station directly served by the train that you are on.
I would suggest that this is clearly intended as an option open to ticket inspection staff on the day of travel and onboard the train, as it refers to "the train that you are on" in the present tense. It cannot have been intended that this would give operators such as GWR the ability to go back nearly 5 years and retrospectively charge passengers for Anytime fares for tens or hundreds of past journeys.
Had I been asked for my Railcard earlier, I would have realised my mistake and would have renewed it immediately - thus avoiding this situation entirely. I would suggest that to the extent any such clause is enforceable, it cannot be applied retrospectively as this is not how the clause is drafted or intended to be applied.
4) Non-enforceability of NRCoT condition 9.2.1
Further to the applicability of the above condition, I would also deny that it constitutes an enforceable contractual clause. Contracts for train travel fall within the remit of the Consumer Rights Act. Section 62 thereof states that:
- An unfair term of a consumer contract is not binding on the consumer.
This is defined as meaning:
- A term is unfair if, contrary to the requirement of good faith, it causes a significant imbalance in the parties' rights and obligations under the contract to the detriment of the consumer.
Furthermore, Schedule 2 of the Act lists terms which may be regarded as unfair. Paragraph 6 of Part 1 includes:
- A term which has the object or effect of requiring a consumer who fails to fulfil his obligations under the contract to pay a disproportionately high sum in compensation.
The significant imbalance, and disproportionality, caused by condition 9.2.1 as written is demonstrated by the journey from Weston-super-Mare to London on 28 October 2023. You are alleging I am liable for the £268 cost of an Anytime Return. Given that I had paid £57.55 for my Railcard discounted ticket, and would have paid £87.20 if I had bought an undiscounted ticket, charging £268 is clearly out of all proportion to the discount which I received.
Under section 64 of the Act, terms as to the price payable are only excluded from assessment for fairness if the they are transparent and prominent. The latter is defined as meaning:
- A term is prominent for the purposes of this section if it is brought to the consumer's attention in such a way that an average consumer would be aware of the term.
Condition 9.2.1 is not in any way brought to the consumer's attention. It is buried 9 pages into a 34 page document, which is only linked to or referenced (not even displayed) when purchasing a ticket. It is clear that no average consumer would be aware of its scope and the potential for it to lead to demands for hundreds of pounds, years after travelling.
I would also note that the clause could be viewed as a 'penalty clause' to which particular attention would have to be drawn for it to be enforceable, based on the 'red hand rule' - this is not at all the case with section 9.2.1. Furthermore, under the principles established in
ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67, any penalty-like charges must be proportionate to be held enforceable. Condition 9.2.1 clearly does not meet this requirement.
Conclusion
Based on my concerns stated above, I cannot accept liability for the full amount you are claiming.
However, in the interests of resolving this matter promptly and without the need for further action, I am prepared to make immediate payment of the discount I incorrectly obtained using the expired Railcard (£140.20) whilst travelling on tickets which would have allowed me to travel on your services. Should you be able to provide evidence of your authority to recover amounts on behalf of other train companies, I would also be willing to make immediate payment of the discount in relation to the remaining journeys (£8.60). These amounts would be in full and final settlement of any claims in relation to the respective journeys.
I would be grateful if you could confirm whether this proposal is acceptable. Alternatively, I will have no choice but to defend any legal claim on the basis described above.
Yours sincerely,
[your name]