You might also have said that "The Band" and "Meat Loaf" should have been "the band" and "meat loaf" thus changing it from cryptic to obvious.
Or how about "Haggard novel with band and meat"?
Next time perhaps I'll just give the name of the station.
Your idea is good. The implementation is not.
"We must expect the composer to play tricks, but we shall insist that he play fair. The Book of the Crossword lays this injunction upon him: "You need not mean what you say, but you must say what you mean." This is a superior way of saying that he can't have it both ways. He may attempt to mislead by employing a form of words which can be taken in more than one way, and it is your fault if you take it the wrong way, but it is his fault if you can't logically take it the right way."
from
Armchair Crosswords
Ignoring the difference between common and proper nouns does not 'play fair'. My criticism is intended to be constructive. If you do not see it that way then there is nothing more to be said.
If you look back through this thread you will find over a hundred of my clues. If you can see that some are unfair/unsound then feel free to comment
on them. I don't mind if you are trying to help to improve the standard.