Dear West Midlands Railway,
Thank you for your letter and allowing me the opportunity to respond. I want to start again by offering my apologies and the frustrations that it may have caused.
Regarding the 154 transactions you have investigated, I have examined my purchase history and admit that I have not always bought the correct ticket, but I do not believe that it was on 154 occasions. Please could you provide a full breakdown of the tickets so I can assess all transactions accordingly?
Any tickets that involved using a railcard in August 2024 would be short fared as I didn’t have one back then. As mentioned previously, I have a railcard now so any tickets used in future will be valid.
I take full accountability for this and want to get this matter resolved immediately. I accept that I need to pay for any incorrect fares paid and related administrative costs to bring this matter to swift a conclusion. Please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused. I can assure you this will not happen again.
Is that better?
Maybe it's a generational thing, but I personally hate 'reaching out'. Maybe something like " Thank you for your letter allowing me to respond to your findings".
Then maybe start the next paragraph by saying that you have also examined your purchasing history and admit that you have not always bought the correct ticket, but do not believe that it was on 154 occasions, so please could they provide a breakdown so you can respond fully.
Also, do you want to say that you are happy to compensate the company for the incorrect fares paid and related administrative costs in order to bring the matter to a swift conclusion. You say you want to resolve the matter immediately, and one way would be for the company to prosecute you, so offering to pay a financial settlement may help close off this option.
You may also wish to point out that you have now bought a railcard which adds substance to the fact that you intend to pay the correct fare from now on and have been doing so for x months