Hi there, I would like to receive some advice on the following matter.
On 4 Feb, I was running late for work. I usually tap in at Waddon (open barrier station) but in a rush I missed it. My journey is typically Waddon -> London Bridge -> Blackfriars. In this rush, I ended up getting on the train without tapping in. I couldn't find the option to book a Waddon to Blackfriars ticket on Trainline so I wrongly ended up booking a LB to Blackfriars one instead. I know that's a short fare and due to a big error of judgement on my part, I thought that would be fine since I was running late.
As my train arrived at Blackfriars earlier than it said on my ticket, I was apprehended. I then told the Revenue Protection Team officer my whole situation and he took my details down and let me go, saying it's likely I'll have to pay the fare later in full for Waddon to Blackfriars.
I have since received a notice of intent to prosecute. They have asked me to reply, asking me to provide details of what happened from my POV. I am planning to send the following reply and would like to hear any feedback. I only said that stuff about being late and in a rush to provide context for the situation - to make it clear, I know it was my mistake which I regret and I will take this as a learning experience and buy tickets in advance.
I would also appreciate any further advice if possible please. Namely, if you recommend that I get a solicitor. This was a very poor choice by me and I'm keen to get it sorted out. I have attached the letter I received, with my personal details cropped.
If someone could also let me know if it is customary to be given a NIP after being apprehended on only one occasion, or if this NIP means that they have issued this NIP based on my trainline record, that would be appreciated.
(For context, I have never been apprehended or had my details taken before. I've used trainline for years now and while I am 99% sure that I have paid in full for all of my train journeys, a small part of me thinks that there may be one or two occasions where I had the wrong ticket. Does this need to be flagged by me in my response or should I just expect this to be added to the settlement fee?)
Thanks a lot in advance - any help would be extremely appreciated.
Draft Reply:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you about the incident pertaining to reference [].
I would like to sincerely apologise for not holding a valid ticket for my full journey from Waddon to London Blackfriars. I understand that this did not cover the entire journey from the start and I am very regretful that I purchased the wrong ticket.
I acknowledge that I violated my responsibility to ensure that I travel with the correct ticket and I will endeavour to ensure that I do so going forward. I know that being in a rush is not a valid excuse. I apologise once again for my complacency and any resources spent dealing with my mistake.
I have taken actions by setting alarms the night before work to pre book tickets in advance, or by getting to the station on time to tap in with my oyster card to avoid this situation.
I would be very thankful if you would consider letting me settle this matter out of court where I am willing to cover any outstanding costs. In the future I will make sure I always have a valid ticket while travelling.
I am sorry once again and hope to resolve this matter amicably and with cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Name
On 4 Feb, I was running late for work. I usually tap in at Waddon (open barrier station) but in a rush I missed it. My journey is typically Waddon -> London Bridge -> Blackfriars. In this rush, I ended up getting on the train without tapping in. I couldn't find the option to book a Waddon to Blackfriars ticket on Trainline so I wrongly ended up booking a LB to Blackfriars one instead. I know that's a short fare and due to a big error of judgement on my part, I thought that would be fine since I was running late.
As my train arrived at Blackfriars earlier than it said on my ticket, I was apprehended. I then told the Revenue Protection Team officer my whole situation and he took my details down and let me go, saying it's likely I'll have to pay the fare later in full for Waddon to Blackfriars.
I have since received a notice of intent to prosecute. They have asked me to reply, asking me to provide details of what happened from my POV. I am planning to send the following reply and would like to hear any feedback. I only said that stuff about being late and in a rush to provide context for the situation - to make it clear, I know it was my mistake which I regret and I will take this as a learning experience and buy tickets in advance.
I would also appreciate any further advice if possible please. Namely, if you recommend that I get a solicitor. This was a very poor choice by me and I'm keen to get it sorted out. I have attached the letter I received, with my personal details cropped.
If someone could also let me know if it is customary to be given a NIP after being apprehended on only one occasion, or if this NIP means that they have issued this NIP based on my trainline record, that would be appreciated.
(For context, I have never been apprehended or had my details taken before. I've used trainline for years now and while I am 99% sure that I have paid in full for all of my train journeys, a small part of me thinks that there may be one or two occasions where I had the wrong ticket. Does this need to be flagged by me in my response or should I just expect this to be added to the settlement fee?)
Thanks a lot in advance - any help would be extremely appreciated.
Draft Reply:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you about the incident pertaining to reference [].
I would like to sincerely apologise for not holding a valid ticket for my full journey from Waddon to London Blackfriars. I understand that this did not cover the entire journey from the start and I am very regretful that I purchased the wrong ticket.
I acknowledge that I violated my responsibility to ensure that I travel with the correct ticket and I will endeavour to ensure that I do so going forward. I know that being in a rush is not a valid excuse. I apologise once again for my complacency and any resources spent dealing with my mistake.
I have taken actions by setting alarms the night before work to pre book tickets in advance, or by getting to the station on time to tap in with my oyster card to avoid this situation.
I would be very thankful if you would consider letting me settle this matter out of court where I am willing to cover any outstanding costs. In the future I will make sure I always have a valid ticket while travelling.
I am sorry once again and hope to resolve this matter amicably and with cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Name
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