Hi all and thank you for your comments - could you please let me know if you think the below is an appropriate and acceptable response from the daughter:
Dear Lucy,
I am writing in response to your letter regarding the travel incident on 28/11/2024. I would like to clarify the circumstances surrounding this matter and request your consideration regarding the settlement terms.
I purchased the ticket in question but did not travel on that day. Instead, I gave the ticket to my brother, unaware that the railcard discount had been applied. Unfortunately, he was also unaware that he was not permitted to travel using a ticket purchased with my railcard until informed by the Train Manager. I acknowledge that this was a mistake on my part, and I fully understand the importance of adhering to rail travel policies.
I would like to settle this matter and am willing to pay the full price of a Standard Anytime Single ticket to resolve it out of court. However, I would like to respectfully request whether the £250 administrative fee could be reconsidered or reduced. This was an honest mistake and misunderstanding, and I have never previously committed any travel-related offence.
Additionally, as I am a student based in London, I would like to request an extension or installment plan for the payment if possible. I would appreciate any flexibility you could provide in this regard.
Please let me know if my request can be considered and the next steps I should take. Thank you for your time and understanding.