Hi all,
I have been issued a fixed penalty fare notice and written up an appeal, and am just looking for advice on whether I could avoid the charge by tweaking this or adding any further information.
I accidentally boarded a train without a ticket as I had done what I needed to to complete the purchase but it had not gone through due to signal issues at the station (Menston, platform 2), which I didn't realise until I opened my phone to produce the ticket. The inspector saw the payment loading screen and then saw it go back to the purchase order screen, so he was aware that it was a technical error, but still had to issue me a notice as this is the policy / body cam was on. He encouraged me not to pay it though, and to submit an appeal.
I have written up the following appeal:
"While waiting for my train to Leeds at the Menston train station Platform 2 from 17:15 to 17:23, I attempted to buy a train ticket to Leeds several times, and the Trainline application was lagging due to the poor signal at the station platform. Once I was able to open the app and choose my journey then go through PayPal to purchase the ticket, I pressed continue to review order and put my phone in my bag under the impression that I had purchased a ticket, and boarded the train at 17:23.
When the member of staff approached me at 17:24 I opened my phone to produce the ticket, but due to the poor signal at the station platform the payment had not worked and the page redirected me back to the PayPal payment screen. I was showing the member of staff my screen during this time, and he saw that I had done what I needed to to buy a ticket before boarding but that it had not worked. I explained this to the member of staff and told him that I could press confirm order again, as we had left the station and the signal was improving.
The member of staff explained to me that I needed to take a screenshot of my screen to mark the time, and that because I was not successful in purchasing my ticket he had to issue me a fixed penalty notice, but that I could appeal this by submitting a detailed account of the events. He explained the process to me for appealing the notice and let me know that I had 21 days to do so. I cooperated with signing the notice, thanked him for his help, and purchased a ticket in order to get through the barriers upon arrival at Leeds at 17:41.
I have never travelled without a valid ticket prior and I would like to appeal this notice on the basis that I boarded the train without knowing that I was not holding a valid ticket, went to produce my ticket immediately, and that the member of staff witnessed the technical error which prevented me from doing so. I am uploading the screenshot marking time, as well as the ticket I bought once boarded."
I would appreciate any help!
I have been issued a fixed penalty fare notice and written up an appeal, and am just looking for advice on whether I could avoid the charge by tweaking this or adding any further information.
I accidentally boarded a train without a ticket as I had done what I needed to to complete the purchase but it had not gone through due to signal issues at the station (Menston, platform 2), which I didn't realise until I opened my phone to produce the ticket. The inspector saw the payment loading screen and then saw it go back to the purchase order screen, so he was aware that it was a technical error, but still had to issue me a notice as this is the policy / body cam was on. He encouraged me not to pay it though, and to submit an appeal.
I have written up the following appeal:
"While waiting for my train to Leeds at the Menston train station Platform 2 from 17:15 to 17:23, I attempted to buy a train ticket to Leeds several times, and the Trainline application was lagging due to the poor signal at the station platform. Once I was able to open the app and choose my journey then go through PayPal to purchase the ticket, I pressed continue to review order and put my phone in my bag under the impression that I had purchased a ticket, and boarded the train at 17:23.
When the member of staff approached me at 17:24 I opened my phone to produce the ticket, but due to the poor signal at the station platform the payment had not worked and the page redirected me back to the PayPal payment screen. I was showing the member of staff my screen during this time, and he saw that I had done what I needed to to buy a ticket before boarding but that it had not worked. I explained this to the member of staff and told him that I could press confirm order again, as we had left the station and the signal was improving.
The member of staff explained to me that I needed to take a screenshot of my screen to mark the time, and that because I was not successful in purchasing my ticket he had to issue me a fixed penalty notice, but that I could appeal this by submitting a detailed account of the events. He explained the process to me for appealing the notice and let me know that I had 21 days to do so. I cooperated with signing the notice, thanked him for his help, and purchased a ticket in order to get through the barriers upon arrival at Leeds at 17:41.
I have never travelled without a valid ticket prior and I would like to appeal this notice on the basis that I boarded the train without knowing that I was not holding a valid ticket, went to produce my ticket immediately, and that the member of staff witnessed the technical error which prevented me from doing so. I am uploading the screenshot marking time, as well as the ticket I bought once boarded."
I would appreciate any help!


I have uploaded copies.