I agree with 90019 there, but another area of concern for me is the burnt out sky. That tends to happen when you shoot into the sun
That train was heading from Taunton-York in the morning so with it being a predominantly northbound train you're facing an awkward task to get a location where the sun isn't impeding you rather than working with you. The sun rises in the east so if you can get the train heading in a roughly easterly direction at any point in its journey then you'll get a well lit shot if the sun is out to play - hence the reason I went to Washwood Heath (
http://www.ferret.fotopic.net/p61610073.html). Here, the train is heading towards the sun and so I've got a blue sky and sun on the nose of the loco.
In short, the choice of location can be crucial to the quality of your shot! When I'm going out to shoot a specific train, the first thing I do is look at the timings and then a map of the railway to see if I can get a location where the sun will be in the right place - ie sun shining on the nose and side of the loco. In this case, the train heads north at Kiddy so you're always going to be shooting towards where the sun is.
Anyway, on the plus side, the image is sharp and clear so there's nowt wrong there - but better positioning as described by 90019 and a better choice of location would yield a good quality shot I reckon!