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Book by Bill Bryson -- bad marks for railway homework

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Have just been reading a newly-published book by Bill Bryson, an author with whom I have long had a love-hate relationship (with the “hate” element gradually coming to predominate over the “love” one). This work, The Road to Little Dribbling, tells of further travels in Great Britain by Bryson – a kind of sequel twenty years later, to his Notes From a Small Island. Various mentions in the book, of rail-related matters – on the whole, the author regards rail passenger services as a good thing. He gives several pages to an attempted outline of the Beeching cuts, expressing regrets at the more extreme manifestations of same.

I have often found, over a variety of factual matters, that Bryson’s research tends to be sloppy, and that he quite often publishes supposed “facts”, which are inaccurate: he can be suspected of valuing getting a laugh, or coming out with startling stuff in quest of attention, more highly than telling the truth. A few of his statements in the “Beeching” passage will get the wrong kind of attention from even moderately knowledgeable railway enthusiasts. In an “aside” about the plethora of pre-Grouping companies, he states that the Isle of Wight’s 55 miles of track were operated by eight separate companies. Certainly not all at once (which is what I think one would infer from that statement) – not any way, in which one might try to make sense of those words.

Further on, re the Beeching Report: “Beeching commissioned a study which showed that the situation was even worse than thought. Some lines were doing hardly any business at all. The Invergarry and Fort Augustus line in Scotland was found to be carrying an average of just six passengers a day. The little Llangynog-to-Mochnant line in Wales had average daily earnings of less than £1.” What?? This stuff was way pre-Beeching. The Fort Augustus branch was closed to passenger traffic by the LNER in 1933, and to freight in 1947. And his garbled attempt to, presumably, identify the Llynclys Jun. / Blodwell Jun. -- Llangynog line: this route lost its passenger service in 1951 (freight as far as Llanrhaiadr Mochnant continued longer). Bryson would seem to have found random, arresting data somewhere, which he throws into the book without checking its relevance to the intended thread of his discourse.

I’d feel inclined to write to Mr. B. c/o his publisher, gently raising these points. However, it seems that as from this new book, he has started with a gimmick of harping on about how he is getting old, and starting to fail in body and mind (he was born in 1951, for heaven’s sake – not even sixty-five yet). One would expect that from now on, he’ll be liable to brush off any attempts to remonstrate with him about published inaccuracies, with the catch-all of his beginning to become old and “gaga”.

At one point in his recounted travels in this book, he calls in at Sheringham and encounters the North Norfolk Railway: cue for a bout of humour at the expense of British hobbyists in general, and railway enthusiasts in particular – superficially affectionate, but with what I feel to be some slightly nasty barbs. And the book overall, I found mediocre at best. Mr. Bryson is in a fair way toward losing, in the person of myself, a reader for any further material which he may produce.
 
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I think it's important to bear in mind the nature of one's 'research' with regards to their written genre. Bryson is a traveler, not a historian, not a rail enthusiast, not a scientist etc.. therefore it's unrealistic to expect him to get his 'research' in those fields down to a tee. Some might find that off-putting,which makes Bryson's books so accessible.
 

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I think it's important to bear in mind the nature of one's 'research' with regards to their written genre. Bryson is a traveler, not a historian, not a rail enthusiast, not a scientist etc.. therefore it's unrealistic to expect him to get his 'research' in those fields down to a tee. Some might find that off-putting,which makes Bryson's books so accessible.

This would be my view too. If I had read such things in "A History of the British Railway Network" I would be slightly annoyed, but not in a light entertainment travel book.

I like Bryson's stuff with "A Walk in the Woods" being my absolute favourite, but I was disappointed in his latest effort I must admit.
 

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I've a feeling I saw Bill Bryson on a 308 from Ilkley once chatting to someone about his books.

I've enjoyed the others I've read, so will doubtless give it a try when its out on paperback.
 

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I was very disappointed by the book, it feels extremely half-arsed, too many phrases that essentially say "I looked this fact up on google to pad up the wordcount". It might be worth getting out of the bargain bin, but I felt ripped off at paying a tenner for it. And I do like Bill Bryson.

I think the google research is probably the main issue.

But equally I don't care if the odd fact is wrong. And anyone who writes in to correct him can expect the vitriol he poured forth on the Ffestiniog Railway in Notes from a Small Island :lol:

Though I think the Ffestiniog Railway probably deserved it
 
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Thanks all, for thoughts. Perhaps this makes me a humourless pedant: but I feel strongly that if you're writing a non-fiction book, even a "light" one, you b--- well ought to try your utmost to get all your info right.

I was very disappointed by the book, it feels extremely half-arsed, too many phrases that essentially say "I looked this fact up on google to pad up the wordcount". It might be worth getting out of the bargain bin, but I felt ripped off at paying a tenner for it. And I do like Bill Bryson.

I think the google research is probably the main issue.

But equally I don't care if the odd fact is wrong. And anyone who writes in to correct him can expect the vitriol he poured forth on the Ffestiniog Railway in Notes from a Small Island :lol:

Though I think the Ffestiniog Railway probably deserved it

I'm a devotee of the Ffestiniog -- belonged to the FR Society for many years -- and Bryson's diatribe against it in NfaSI caused my liking for him, as by reflex, to go down by a number of points. If I recall correctly, he was annoyed by sub-optimal help / information from a bod working on the FR. I find this kind of thing to be a big part of his would-be humorous "shtick", and in my opinion a part which he flogs to death, and which isn't all that funny in the first place: encountering unsatisfactory / incompetent customer service of one kind or another, and getting apocalyptically enraged by it.

Like you ArcticTroll, I reckoned "Little Dribbling" to be definitely on the weak side: some worthwhile patches in it, but it largely felt like an exercise on his part in churning out his same old stuff, to keep the money flowing in. I've always been ambivalent at best, about Bryson: feel that on a good day, he can be extremely funny and perceptive; but his good days have never been super-frequent, and have tended over his writing career, to become fewer and further between.

Bryson drops something of a railway-related clanger in his book on Australia. In a paragraph about the historically confused Australian rail-gauges situation, he mentions how the more remote parts of the country "economically decided on a standard of 3 feet 6 inches (a width not far off that of amusement park rides; people must have ridden with their legs out of the windows)." While the amusement-park thing is gross hyperbole; I don't feel inclined to berate him for having this general impression. Reckonably an understandable misconception on the part of a layman as regards railways, not aware that the limiting factor is basically loading gauge, not distance between the rails -- and from the book, it seems likely that he never knowingly saw a 3ft 6in gauge train.
 

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I've forgotten about that. For sure, wherever Mr.B. goes, there's a mighty lot of stuff that he doesn't like. I do recall that in his calling in at Weston-super-Mare, he made no mention of the late Weston, Clevedon & Portishead Light Railway...
 

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I think he hit on his subject, originally, quite naturally, but now seeks out the 'Fawlty Towers' theme as rote. If one visits a preserved railway, it won't be too long before one encounters a rail nutter, whether staff or visitor. The point is, they're harmless, and I think comics need to bear that in mind a wee bit. Frankie Boyle is I suppose an extreme example of this gratuitous unkind behaviour.

I have had dealings with Bryson and I found him a very gentle, pleasant fellow. I just think he could do more good by exposing the real whack jobs in his own country more. There is plenty of material there!
 

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It seems quite often that controversial figures turn out to be more congenial on an individual level, than one might suspect from impressions received, of their public persona. I can definitely see Bryson being a nice guy personally, though he can come across as more than a bit of an arse in his writings. I'm a heretic in the eyes of a number of people whom I know, in that I can't stand the works of the late Terry Pratchett -- find them profoundly unappealing and utterly un-funny. However, I gather that pretty well everyone who knew Pratchett "in his private and personal capacity" found him a truly lovely bloke, and very modest and unassuming -- far from how I would have, wrongly, imagined him as being.
 

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Bryson's books are personal memoirs, not histories or travel guides. He fills them with things that amuse him. Just imagine he's Uncle William who's dropped in for tea and is telling you amusing tales of his trips.
 

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Bill Bryson will do what amuses Bill Bryson. When he was Chancellor of Durham University he was approached by The Assassins, one of the role-playing societies, to star in their spoof video called "The Assassinator". Of course he did it. It was very funny. He's one of the few Chancellors I've seen who actually got involved with the University and the student population; this is no doubt why he is no longer Chancellor of the university.

I had the pleasure of meeting him a couple of times when I worked at Durham, he's a very pleasant chap, although he won't put up with any rubbish. He obviously he over-eggs the grumpiness for comedic effect. It's why I'm so disappointed in the latest book. In the intro he says he wasn't sure about writing it, and it definitely shows.
 
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Bryson's books are personal memoirs, not histories or travel guides. He fills them with things that amuse him. Just imagine he's Uncle William who's dropped in for tea and is telling you amusing tales of his trips.

To be honest, I reckon that with Uncle William, I'd silently roll my eyes and brace myself to tactfully endure his foolish twaddle, because he's family. I take with less equanimity, having paid £15 for a tome by Bryson and finding it largely to be bilge -- though I accepted when purchasing it, that I was playing "Russian roulette" by doing so. It might have turned out to be one of his better efforts...
 

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I was on the point of buying Bryson's latest book on-line. I hesitated at the last moment before making that final click, and decided to put my name on the waiting list at my local library instead. Having now read other people's opinions on here, I'm glad I didn't shell out my hard-earned.

I have enjoyed some of Bryson's previous books. I've found his observations of some of the details of places I know myself to be very perceptive. But I also know his tendency for blather.
 

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To be honest, I reckon that with Uncle William, I'd silently roll my eyes and brace myself to tactfully endure his foolish twaddle, because he's family. I take with less equanimity, having paid £15 for a tome by Bryson and finding it largely to be bilge -- though I accepted when purchasing it, that I was playing "Russian roulette" by doing so. It might have turned out to be one of his better efforts...
£15? Available for much less online and in the right bookshops.
 

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Thanks all, for thoughts. Perhaps this makes me a humourless pedant: but I feel strongly that if you're writing a non-fiction book, even a "light" one, you b--- well ought to try your utmost to get all your info right.

Make that at least two humourless pedants in this group then.

If he's going to use 'facts' as you illustrate, he is purporting to be writing a cogent text for an argument - when in reality, he is taking 'facts' totally out of context to make points which do not stand up. That is not 'light travel reading' in my books, it is fraud.

I'm a devotee of the Ffestiniog -- belonged to the FR Society for many years -- and Bryson's diatribe against it in NfaSI caused my liking for him, as by reflex, to go down by a number of points.

If I recall correctly, he was annoyed by sub-optimal help / information from a bod working on the FR. I find this kind of thing to be a big part of his would-be humorous "shtick", and in my opinion a part which he flogs to death, and which isn't all that funny in the first place: encountering unsatisfactory / incompetent customer service of one kind or another, and getting apocalyptically enraged by it.
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It is far easier to write 'exciting' text when complaning/criticising than when praising. I've only read his Notes from a small Island, but I could detect this even then.

I'm glad you started this post. Hopefully Mr Bryson might read it and think about improving his literary ethical standards in any future volumes.
 

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Make that at least two humourless pedants in this group then.

If he's going to use 'facts' as you illustrate, he is purporting to be writing a cogent text for an argument - when in reality, he is taking 'facts' totally out of context to make points which do not stand up. That is not 'light travel reading' in my books, it is fraud.

Make that at least three humourless pedants!
 

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Notes From a Small Island was undoubtedly a love letter to Blighty. Since then he's moved back to America, then moved back here.

I just wonder whether he's finally become British enough to realise that everything's going down the pan :lol:
 

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£15? Available for much less online and in the right bookshops.

I tend toward crazy impulse-purchasing. Walked into W.H. Smith's, and there the book was, staring at me -- feeling a bit "flush", I bought it on the spot. Yes, impulse-buyers are asking for it...

I'm glad you started this post. Hopefully Mr Bryson might read it and think about improving his literary ethical standards in any future volumes.

There's no harm in hoping, as they say in Ireland. My impression, though, is that in his public capacity, our Bill is serenely convinced of his total perfection in all things !

Notes From a Small Island was undoubtedly a love letter to Blighty. Since then he's moved back to America, then moved back here.

I just wonder whether he's finally become British enough to realise that everything's going down the pan :lol:

If a love letter: then, I feel, with the pen dipped in strong acid a lot of the time -- though love letters can indeed have that trait.

Over and over in Little Dribbling, he focuses on how ugly / tacky / trivialised / corrupt /stupidly handled things seem to have become, in comparison with the time of Small Island back in the last century. However, IMO he does so much "rubbishing" of people and things that he encounters -- and with this being increasingly so much of a staple of his output -- that the reader is apt to succumb to "irritation / annoyance / outrage fatigue", and it all starts to go indistinguishably over said reader's head.
 
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