Thanks everyone for the lively discussion. This is the repsonse I have prepared. Please give me any feedback you think will help resolve the situation and avoid it being pursued any further. I have too many stresses in my life to take on another challenge.
Dear Retail Fraud Team,
I am writing in response to the email received XX October 2025 (Reference: XXXXX).
I am very sorry for the confusion I have caused. I was advised by a colleague to use the multiflex tickets as it was meant to be a more cost effective way for me to commute to work. I briefly looked into the tickets online and they were marketed to people like myself who work hybrid both at home and at the office.
Because I was used to buying return tickets before I tried using the multiflex tickets, I assumed they worked in a similar way. I must admit, I was confused by the wording of the ticket as it said it was ‘bidirectional tickets’ which I understood to be similar to the day return tickets I had previously purchased. My ignorance of the term, as well as the ability to use the same ticket on my return journey without any issue at the gates or being challenged by anyone, didn’t cause me to question whether I was using the ticket correctly.
I of course am happy to pay any outstanding ticket costs related to the confusion. Could I please pay for the ticket costs due and avoid having this past on to the Transport Police?
Again, I sincerely apologise for my failure to properly check and ensure the proper use of the Multiflex tickets. For future journeys, I will be using the Tap On/Off functionality with my debit card for each journey.
I am very sorry for this incident and will take care to ensure this will not happen again.
I am keen to settle this matter amicably and without the need for prosecution. I am happy to pay the outstanding fare and cover any administrative costs incurred in handling this.
My sincerest apologies again.
Yours Sincerely,
Far too long in my opinion. The second paragraph explaining why you used Multiflex tickets is totally irrelevant, the fraud team are unlikely to be interested in this.
The following para explaining why you thought they were returns is the critical para, and reads ok to me. Personally, I would also be suggesting that TfW should amend their app to make it clear to anyone buying them that the Multiflex tickets are not returns.
I would delete the sentence about it being passed to the BTP, as it won't be BTP who would prosecute. And I would delete the sentence where you say it was your fault, as admitting fault in writing may not be a good idea should they decide to prosecute. And you are not consistent in whether you are talking about one incident/fare, or multiple instances.
Personally, I would be a bit concerned about effectively writing them a blank cheque, saying that you will pay whatever they demand, but if you are happy to do so that is up to you. However, I think that you should at least be asking them how much you need to pay to settle the matter.
My suggested changes to the following paras.
I of course am happy to pay any outstanding ticket costs related to the confusion.
Could I please pay for the ticket costs due and avoid having this past on to the Transport Police?
Again, I sincerely apologise for my failure to properly check and ensure the proper use of the Multiflex tickets.
I am very sorry
for this incident and will take care to ensure this will not happen again. For future journeys, I will be using the Tap On/Off functionality with my debit card for each journey.
I am keen to settle this matter amicably and without the need for prosecution. I am happy to pay the outstanding
fares and cover any administrative costs incurred in handling this. Can you please advise of the costs I would need to pay to settle this matter.